Frankly the facial expression ruined the art for me. A wink and a smirk or maybe pursed lips could have given this drawing 20x more class and brought the point across better. If you want my two cents- instead of having her sitting on the floor cross legged with her garter hanging out, try a perspective of her standing bent forward, maybe show a little cleavage, and give her a wink. (be creative) allowing you to give her the sexy edge, but not making it look like she is an escort... as she is now, you could add a brick wall and a sidewalk to this drawing, and she would make a fine harlot. I think that this is one of your better works, it looks like a lot more work went into it, but make sure that it still carries your flair, because it does look a tad suspicious. Keep up the good work, I love finding new art on the portal, and this one was a good chance to offer my two cents.
i'd love to get some feedback from you with your thoughts.
-keep up the goodwork,
But that's the thing, honey...my character is not like that. She's not confident in her sexuality to wink or smile seductively, she's more child-like in mindset.
This is only a sketch after all, I'll have to crank out other such drawings of her. :)
From one to another.
my only two problems with this art *(because I like it a lot, and I actually felt compelled to write you this review even at 2:20-ish in the morning.) are Samus has tooo long of a face, and I did read that you tried to make her more manly, really what you did is elongate her body features more, not a bad thing, it makes the whip effect look rad. The other problem was, Samus is very very curvy, have you ever gotten a smashball in brawl? she is much more voluptuous then you portray her here, it might be because of the elongated style, I understand that it would change the picture, but i think a little more would have gotten it perfect. ( her chest is kinda spread apart too... just sayin) over all I like it a lot, I like your work, and I hope you keep it up.
Thanks very much for your constructive review :)
I wanted to try and make her less curvy, and make her look more fierce (and manly :P ). After all, she is a bounty hunter, and I never really got that feeling when playing in brawl. I think if I redid it I would smooth out some of the angles and redo all of the shading (which would help in the chest department, I believe).
Thanks again for your cc, I really appreciate it.
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