Criticism.
Frankly the facial expression ruined the art for me. A wink and a smirk or maybe pursed lips could have given this drawing 20x more class and brought the point across better. If you want my two cents- instead of having her sitting on the floor cross legged with her garter hanging out, try a perspective of her standing bent forward, maybe show a little cleavage, and give her a wink. (be creative) allowing you to give her the sexy edge, but not making it look like she is an escort... as she is now, you could add a brick wall and a sidewalk to this drawing, and she would make a fine harlot. I think that this is one of your better works, it looks like a lot more work went into it, but make sure that it still carries your flair, because it does look a tad suspicious. Keep up the good work, I love finding new art on the portal, and this one was a good chance to offer my two cents.
i'd love to get some feedback from you with your thoughts.
-keep up the goodwork,
-BU